The three reasons anyone reads your screenplay.

There are three reasons people will agree to read your screenplay. You can influence all of them.

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The movie business has been a bit lethargic the last couple of years. A pessimism has crept in, and it's affected nearly every little corner of the industry.

The good news is that there are growing signs that things are changing.

This year's box office has got people excited. Companies have adjusted a bit from the strike and the shrinking of the TV business.

It will be some time before we're back to where we were, and in many aspects, it will never be like it was.

But I don't think the energy and enthusiasm of people looking for great projects will be one of those things that never bounces back.

It's just too exciting to have a hit.

There is too much money involved, and it is too much fun to have a project that works.

So hang in there. Get through this period.

Keep testing, probing, and trying to get your screenplay in the right hands. And be ready for when the opportunity comes.

But certain truths will remain.

And one of those is that getting your screenplay read is hard.

Reading a screenplay is a commitment. Even when it's someone's job. They simply can't read EVERY script.

So this commitment comes in stages. The first one is an agreement they have with you that they will take a look at it.

But after that, the agreement is mostly with themselves.

  • They will look at the first ten pages.
  • If that's okay, they will read the first act.
  • If that's okay, they will read up to the midpoint.
  • If that's okay, they will finish.

Keep in mind, they can renegotiate this deal with themselves at any time and stop completely on any page, but they usually give themselves these increments.

But first, they have to agree to read the screenplay.

And in my experience, there are three reasons people will agree to do that.

  1. A personal introduction.
  2. Heat and attraction.
  3. The logline and the concept it contains.

Believe it or not, you can heavily influence all of these. And when you don't have one, you can double down on the others.

Now, none of this matters if the screenplay isn't ready, but that is an ​entire series of courses​ for another time.

Right now, I just want to focus on shifting our mentality to better position ourselves for this transitional step.

Your attitude matters.

One of the things I wish I had understood earlier about a screenwriting career is how much of a mental battle it all is.

Different stages of your career show different challenges, but there will always be a mental part of the endeavor that you must win.

Early on, a major challenge is spending too much energy on getting read when that energy would be better spent on getting better.

Nearly all writers think they're ready before they actually are. That is normal. But you do not want to spend time and money on a stage you're not ready for.

Your early focus needs to be on getting better and nothing else.

Not everyone is going to listen to me, and people are going to try to get their screenplay out in the world before they're ready to compete.

I get it, and that's okay. I did that too.

So when that happens, how we react to the reality can determine our future.

Do we double our efforts to get better?

Or do we blame the rest of the world for not fully appreciating our genius?

A close call that leads to a pass should motivate you.

It's okay to be disappointed, but you should move rather quickly to motivation to get the job done the next time.

This is not the business for limiting beliefs. This is not the business for Eeyores.

Be careful that your laziness and stubbornness do not find a Trojan horse inside the castle of your ambition.

I wasted a lot of time thinking, "If they would just read the screenplay, they would love it."

But, as they say, hope is not a plan.

This bad plan conveniently let me avoid actual rejection while making it seem like the business was wrong and I was right.

What it didn't do was help my career.

And our career is something we need to take charge of.

It is important to shift your thinking away from being at the mercy of others doing you a favor by reading your screenplay.

You must shift into the approach of offering them an opportunity.

You have to make it in their interest to read your screenplay. Only then will they agree to do so.

The primary friction

The primary problem is that there are too many screenplays written every year. 99.9% of them range from not good enough to just plain bad.

Everyone knows those odds, and they assume yours sucks, too. It's not personal. It's math. It's simply the expected value of sitting down and reading your script.

So what is pushing them to defy that expectation and read YOUR screenplay?

No one is going to read your script totally blind. It does not happen.

You need some level of what I call pre-scrutiny for someone to read your screenplay.

They need SOME reason to believe your screenplay has better odds than the others of being worth their time.

This pre-scrutiny filters your screenplay out of the pile. With that in mind:

There are three reasons anyone agrees to read your screenplay.

Which one you take advantage of depends on your options.

1. Personal Introductions

This is when someone the person personally knows makes the introduction and shares your screenplay with them.

There will never, ever be a better way to get someone to read your screenplay than a well-connected associate vouching for you and recommending you.

This is the ultimate pre-scrutiny.

Unless you have a pre-existing connection, like an uncle or something, it usually takes years to establish these connections in the industry.

But it can be done.

I can't tell you how many writing careers began as someone's assistant or intern.

You have heard the expression, "It's who you know."

But that is only partially true.

The full story is, "It's who you meet, and how well you nurture that relationship."

Now, this isn't possible for everyone, obviously. Age, geography, and disposition can all pretty much eliminate this option.

But before you do…

It's worth making an exhaustive list of every single human being you might possibly know that might know someone who may know someone.

And then you start asking favors.

Only then do you cross it off the list completely.

2. The power of attraction.

This is the most active thing and what you absolutely should be doing.

Go out there and create. Make stuff. Short films. Micro-budget films. Produce plays. Get involved in the comedy community in LA. Something.

Create something with commercial sensibilities that shows what you can do. Get attention for the work. Create something that makes them ask, "What else ya got?"

This is how I got my first agent. I wrote a play that got good reviews, and they called me. I didn't expect it. I didn't reach out to them.

They came to me.

Because they thought I was in more demand than I was.

It initiated a relationship; a year later, he was my agent.

This is the way.

I can't tell you how many careers came out of the Upright Citizens Brigade in LA and NYC in the 2000s.

All from people working together, creating and putting something up in front of an audience.

The recent YouTube surge is no different.

Curry Barker dropped out of film school to make his own films with his creative partner Cooper Tomlinson.

They put their films up on YouTube and generated a following. With near-immediate feedback from an audience, they got better and better until people started to notice.

When he got the chance to make OBSESSION, he knocked it out of the park.

The feedback loop is important.

And this is where live performance and especially social media excel. The barrier to entry to get your work in front of an audience is low.

You just find a way to do it.

And once you get your work in front of people, you will learn at a much faster rate about what works and what doesn't.

This route is also the most fun.

You get to create. And you're growing, and you can even be doing all these other things while you're at it.

You're also developing friendships, working relationships, and a community.

The power of attraction includes legitimate accolades as well.

Yes, some screenwriting contests can help you. It is simply not true that contests are scams. Some are, yes. But those are actually easy to spot.

Every year proves that screenwriting contests are helping writers start their careers.

There is nothing wrong with someone charging you for their services, and if contests are to remain running, they have to.

Legit contests want to help you. That's how they stay in business.

I have two primary bits of advice here:

1) Stick with the contests that have recent success getting their winners introduced to the town.

You do not want to be put in a position where it's you telling people you won a contest. If that person cared about that contest, you will not need to tell them.

You want the contest to introduce you to as many people as possible as their winner or finalist. They need to be making the introductions.

If they don't see your success afterward as their success, don't bother.

2) Re-submit your best material.

This is a giant mistake people make. They submit once, don't advance, and don't submit again. But the original round of readers in any contest is a crapshoot. You can fail to make quarters in one year and win the next.

The Black List and Other Posting Sites

These are great! Very nice that these exist. The issue is that they require any potential reader to scan and make choices about what they want to read.

So they get a long list of projects that scored an 8, and your project is on it! Great! But that 8 does not differentiate you anymore. Every project on the list has at least that.

So the only thing that can 2make your project stand out is the title and… the logline.

3. The concept and the logline.

I can't emphasize the importance of the logline enough. It is the most influential variable in getting your screenplay read and the only one here that you have 100% control over.

You need a stellar logline.

And most screenwriters treat the logline as an afterthought.

The main confusion people have with the logline is that they think its job is to summarize their screenplay. As a result, they write the logline after they write the script.

And this is how I wasted ten years of stellar opportunities at the beginning of my career because I treated a logline as a description.

But that is not the logline's job.

The logline's job is to motivate someone to read your screenplay.

It's a sales tool.

And it's not about the format or the language you use.

What is important about the logline is the concept inside it.

The logline is a container that carries a concept from place to place.

It is the concept that gives the logline its value.

This is why I combined my ​Concept and Logline​ courses as a bundle.

I don't even start a project until I know I have the makings of a great logline.

Without a great logline, your chances of getting read blind drop dramatically.

Like, off a cliff dramatically.

The logline and the concept it carries should get the person excited about your screenplay before they open to page one.

If it doesn't do that, it's not doing its job.

But not every screenplay has a clear concept or makes a great logline.

This is true!

And those screenplays are in for a very tough road. For that project, the three reasons someone will read your screenplay have dropped down to two.

No one owes you a read.

This is a frustrating reality. We work so hard on our projects. We put so much of ourselves into these pages. There is this sense that we've earned a little consideration, right?

But it just doesn't work that way. There are too many screenplays out there and too little time in any one person's day.

They need a reason to pick yours.

It is your job to give them one.


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