Don’t Worry About Being Subtle
Many young writers struggle to be decisive in the moments that populate their screenplays. They find it challenging to openly declare and dramatize what a single moment is about.
Action Lines
Why The Action Lines Matter
So I did that “passion polish.” I didn’t change any dialogue, I didn’t change the structure, or what happened in scenes. I just polished the action lines. That was it. It took me maybe a few days.
The New Mission of the Screenwriter
Our job is this:
To create the emotional experience of watching the movie on the screen.